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JG- your description hardly sucks, however, you should have made it into two sentences [ once your sentence reaches a certain point, the reader stops paying attention ]. Not to mention, your obvious obsession with CYHSY is repetitively mentioned and quickly gets tiresome.

The Rolling Stone Review of Quadrophenia gave it only 4 stars. They gave Nas’s new album 4 stars as well.
How can these people go to sleep at night comparing Nas’s semi-quasi-musical ranting to one of the greatest albums of the 20th century. Joe Levy should issue an apology to The Who

Joel-

Just out of curiosity, what kinds of music descriptions were you looking for?

Here’s a description of mine from my piece about Mouthful of Bees, which was not chosen:

“Mouthful of Bees…create the kind of smart, anxious and angular pop that Clap Your Hands Say Yeah and Tapes N’ Tapes are known for making…(they demonstrate) what kind of record “Some Loud Thunder” could have been if Clap Your Hands Say Yeah had stuck with just one musical direction”

Is that description too wordy? Are there too many mentions of CHYSY? If so, those are criticisms that I can accept and criticisms that are more than fair.

But at the same point in time, I think my description, at the very least, paints a very accurate picture of what MOB sounds like; especially if you’ve heard the record. Most music people are familiar with Tapes N’ Tapes and CYHSY, so namedropping them isn’t necessairly a bad thing, is it?

If I am deluded, and my description, in fact, sucks ass, then I have to wonder: what were you looking for, and what is an example of a good description?

I’ll be super grateful if you respond to this post, but understanding if you don’t. Have a good one.

Sincerely,
Jon Graef

Unless I am missing something once you write the story there is no way to enter it.

sure these suck, but rolling stone reviews are equally uninformative.

I found the 300 word limit limiting. If these are bad, can you IMAGINE what he would’ve said about the other’s? EGAD’S!

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I agree, I found the writing mundane. But congratulations Brett, you can’t get better unless someone tell’s you what your doing wrong.

Congrats Brett. Third time was a charm…

Mouth of the Architect. Not Moth…Yeesch.