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Nice work. You defentiely kept my glazed over ees glued to the computer screen all the while a vivid picture in my head of each scene of events that occured from the over-enthusiastic fans to the emotions practically gushing out of his every move throughout the shoe. But I must agree with a previous critic — a bit US weekly driven…

Good work! Way to explain the whole scene and not just JT. Most of the reviews I read are written by people who are more square than Sponge Bob’s pants. But not yours, a good well rounded synopsis.

This is a very good submission for a piece in Us Weekly and I am now very well-informed of the facts that girls like Justin Timberlake and that Cameron Diaz and Justin Timberlake are no longer an “item”. It’s almost as if I attended the concert myself…

After reading everyones comments, I have to add that all of you who said negative things about this article are just haters who can’t write. I personally thought that this article was very descriptive and showed emotion through out its entirety. Good luck Noelle, I am sure that your article will come out doing well in this competition. Oh, and one other thing Noelle, forget about all those ignorant people who said bad things about it. You are obviously more talented than they will ever be in writing.

Much like “Magret” below, I too have a journalism degree, and I have to agree that this is a very solid piece given the length and the subject. The details are great - it really gave me a clear picture of the concert, from Justin to the fans. And while the ending of the piece is a bit abrupt, I believe this is probably not Noelle’s first article, and in fact, that she has some serious writing experience in her background.

Very enjoyable piece. Well done.
-C.C.

Great Job Noelle…I was at the concert and you captured the most captivating moments of the night. Great Job!

Justin Timberlake isn’t my cup of tea, but I have to admit, this article kept me entertained and made me want to keep reading.
You’ve got talent.

Great article! Well written with vivid details. Who are you people to criticize? I have a journalism degree, do you? I bet you have a G.E.D. Please submit your own work before you criticize someone who is obviously talented.

I really wanted to go to this concert - thanks Noelle for allowing me to “feel” the event. I grew up with a mother who was an incredible writer (writing for TIME, LIFE, etc.), so I have a decent eye for talent. You definitely have talent — this piece did all it was supposed to and then some.
Great work!

I genuinely enjoy reading this piece because it reports the facts, of course, but also adds some intimate touches and truly brings out the performer’s emotion. Sure, writing about “Pop” may not be as ‘popular’ with some of you as the name might suggest; nonetheless, it is a solid piece of writing.

Do I even need to ask the rest of you to consider the irony of EVANxTHExSEAN’s comment? Rolling Stone probably won’t be hiring you, at least not as a writer, if the company cares about their “futer” at all. I mean, hiring someone who can actually spell correctly instead of you? Yeah, what a “totall” downgrade that would be. Keep your chin up, though. It sounds like you’ve mastered the art of running a magazine at - let me just take a guess here - age 16? No, really, Evan, thank you for that peerless writing and positively insightful commentary.

Love you too.

Nice work, Ms. Ibrahim — stay strong.

-C

Well, sean, im going to have to disagree with your ignorant comment on this article, and in the “futer” you may want to check your spelling. Anyways, this article was very well written and I enjoyed the read.

This is a rocking review! Makes me feel like I was there.

ok ive seen much better writing than that and if you call that anything more then a sophmore english paper then you are mental and totally incapable of having a decent magazine in the futer seems like a totall downgrade from here

Love
Evan

I was there and had seen it completely different. But good job!

OKAY it’s good. But how could I be beat by a Justin Timberlake fan!

Okay, that drivel beat my friend’s article???

Kind of dull. Reminds me of something I would have read in my high-school newspaper.