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Assignment One Finalist: Joey Michaels on Detroit

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Note: This is not an official Rolling Stone article. What follows is a submission to the “I’m From Rolling Stone” writing competition.


by Joey Michaels
Age: 21

Want a crash course in urban decay? Visit and take notes on the abandoned building-lined, crime riddled, pothole-coated streets of Detroit, Michigan. Make sure to bring a few notebooks.

Whether it is art imitating life or the reverse, the essence of the state of the city has been captured in the music it has produced since its Motown days.

Alas, the tradition of correlation still seems to be alive and kicking. Today, much of the “The D’s” musical output is a brand of hip hop featuring angry and violent rhymes set to sinisterly dark and evil beats. The ruthlessly cruel stories contained in these raps are all too real; there’s a disturbing abundance of sneakers hanging by their laces from electrical lines over the streets.

The inner city’s hip hop community continues to revolve around the intense, no-holds-barred rap battles the city is known for, most notably hosted by Seven Mile’s infamous Hip Hop Shop and any available dingy basement. But these popular non-violent wars of wordplay have come to symbolize the firearm fights happening just outside their venues.

As hardcore hip hop has paralleled the renegade-like atmosphere of Detroit for a number of years now, the two have recently shown signs of colliding. On New Year’s Eve of 2005, platinum-selling Eminem protégé Obie Trice survived a gunshot wound to the head while driving along an expressway through the city. Only four months later, Eminem’s best friend and fellow D12 member Proof was gunned down in a nightclub on the notorious Eight Mile Road.

A wake up call is needed in the Motor City. As Trice preached in his eulogy at Proof’s funeral, “We’re killing each other, dog. And it’s all about nothing. Nothing. Nothing. We’re all dying…over nothing.”

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L. Conaway | 1/16/2007, 2:52 pm EST

This was by far the most intriguing essay in the group. I have never really given much thought to the correlation between the music and the city it is inspired by but you brought it all into perspective. Great read!

TNisha | 1/15/2007, 3:19 am EST

This piece by far one of my favorits to read. Although I am not familar in were you live and what you scene actually is I like to musical revalation you brought to my mind. I also really like the way you ended your piece over the way you started it. You started it asking a question and yes there is such a thing as you lead sentence being a question but since I am not familar with you and your writing I had to stop and think about the question instead it keeping me going, but like I said the end of it also left me thinking but I believe it is better to leave someone thinking at the end of your piece rather the beginnig because if it is at the beginning the average reader is bond to forget the question and forget you.
Once again amazing piece

Juliette Lacombe | 1/14/2007, 10:49 pm EST

I’m from Grosse Pointe Michigan, an extremely rich suburb only about twenty minutes outside the city that used to be the musical capital of America. The road dividing these polar opposite cities is called Alter, an ironic and grimly humorous name. The article was brutally honest, pointing out the flaws that are devastatingly unavoidable, yet chosen to be ignored. Congrats to the writer for capturing the current state of the city, not the glorious past.

tilly | 1/14/2007, 4:46 pm EST

bang bang!

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